STORYTELLING UNIT: ROUGH CUT

During the post-production I showed my rough cut edit to my tutors and asked for some feedback. I had a full length edit with all my scenes together and it came up to 2:48 which is over the set brief. I was told that if that time is relevant

to my story this doesn't matter. But currently my edit was far too long and could be cut down. As well I just had cut to cut on dialogue which was very boring and basic and didn't look good for my edit, so I used the rolling tool to change the cuts with the audio and made it look a bit better. The biggest issue I had with my rough cut was my audio. I needed wild tracks constantly through my scenes as the wild tracks at the moment are cut up and all over the place. As well my audio from scene 2 isn't clear because of all the cars and background noise has made Zak's dialogue completely unusable so I'll have to re-record it and dub it later on. As well I need to add music into this and the third scene as well.

With the green screen I added the footage and added the effect 'Ultra Key' to the green screen footage and already it looks like good, the effect works and this is without editing and modifying the ultra key or colour grading. Although it isn't at a good enough quality yet, it's enough to show that this idea clearly worked and now all I need to do is fix the ultra key slightly and get rid of the white lines where the green screen is and also make it a bit more crisp. These were the only points that were brought but but the main 2 were my audio and the length of my video as well.