Final Script
Version 4 & the final version of the script weren't hugely different. With Oliver dropping out, the script obviously had to be updated and also there was a lot of feedback coming from the Presenters which needed to be added to the script. Changing over to Sapphire, the Producers added in new questions and I requested that the questions be kept simple and allow Sapphire to talk and sell herself. This was all sorted nice and quickly. A few questions were changed in DIY to ensure we focused on the Independent selling against High Street Selling.
With the feedback from Adeline and Alfie, Adeline explained that the introduction was too complicated. Helen had requested that we have the intro as the introduction as to who is the Fashion expert as we need to learn who our presenters are. Adeline was given a large amount of dialogue which she was struggling to learn and requested that it be changed to "Now after 6 years of modelling on catwalks and magazines, I consider myself quite the Fashion Expert, but Alfie here, he needs all the help me can get" so it's short, simple and gets the information across.
Old to New had a few changes, one of the lines which talks about the reason they're called "Dad Trainers" was removed as it was very cheesy and unneeded. Also, the model doesn't give their opinion of the shoes now as it's a nice and short section which doesn't need too much detail, we're showing one of the current trends and then leading into our Old to New VT.
Version 4 & the final version of the script weren't hugely different. With Oliver dropping out, the script obviously had to be updated and also there was a lot of feedback coming from the Presenters which needed to be added to the script. Changing over to Sapphire, the Producers added in new questions and I requested that the questions be kept simple and allow Sapphire to talk and sell herself. This was all sorted nice and quickly. A few questions were changed in DIY to ensure we focused on the Independent selling against High Street Selling.
With the feedback from Adeline and Alfie, Adeline explained that the introduction was too complicated. Helen had requested that we have the intro as the introduction as to who is the Fashion expert as we need to learn who our presenters are. Adeline was given a large amount of dialogue which she was struggling to learn and requested that it be changed to "Now after 6 years of modelling on catwalks and magazines, I consider myself quite the Fashion Expert, but Alfie here, he needs all the help me can get" so it's short, simple and gets the information across.
Old to New had a few changes, one of the lines which talks about the reason they're called "Dad Trainers" was removed as it was very cheesy and unneeded. Also, the model doesn't give their opinion of the shoes now as it's a nice and short section which doesn't need too much detail, we're showing one of the current trends and then leading into our Old to New VT.
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