DOCUMENTARY UNIT: FINE CUT

With our fine cut we made a huge amount of changes.

The structure we changed. Firstly we got to Shahak straight away. he's the first interview we get as his project is the biggest proof of selfies being bad that we have. Once that was done we went on to the memorial.
The issue with our last cut was that it wasn't making sense, after each section the topic would change. So when Shahak says some people might not know what the memorial is, we went to the vox pops and showed that to back up his comment. Then with that we got a vox pop explaining that the Memorial is for the Holocaust which we then went on to show the Survivors. When the survivors question why people sit on the stones we were able to go back to the vox pops.

We chose to have the vox pops as the returning feature of our doc since these are what's building our case more and more. We then had David Glenwright and after that the Jewish Museum but when showing the rough cut to Zoe, she recommended having David last as he gives more of a solution to the selfie culture with his interview and he also is better to end with Kamran as well and she would have rather a survivor end the documentary but we didn't have any sync which worked as a conclusion.